IELTS ライティング タスク2 サンプルエッセイ (解答例 ) 例題 23 – Educational Value of Computer Games

IELTSTASK2 Vol 23
IELTSTASK2 Vol 23

本記事ではIELTS のライティングTASK2のサンプルエッセイ(解答例)を紹介します。トピックはコンピューターゲームについてです。

1 サンプルエッセイ

Topic:

Computer games are very popular in all ages and nations. Parents think it has little educational value and more harmful effects. What is your opinion about this? Give example based on your own experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Essay:

The pros and cons of playing computer games continue to be a controversial topic. Some people emphasize its adverse aspects and consider gaming as a waste of time. It is my opinion that computer games have an educational value and the harmful effects are minimal. I believe computer games benefit players in terms of developing problem-solving skills and building mutually beneficial relationships with friends.

Players can improve their abilities to overcome challenges through playing their favorite games. Modern computer games are designed to challenge players by providing levels of increasing difficulty based on the skills of the players. This is beneficial as players develop problem-solving abilities while analyzing obstacles and devising a range of strategies to overcome hurdles. For example, when I could not advance in my favorite puzzle game, I learned to search for useful information online that would help me on my quest. This research and learning process has assisted me in my academic career.

Furthermore, children learn to develop relationship with other gamers through playing games. They come to realize that when they support their friends who may be in need of help, the favor is often returned. In contrast, when selfish actions result in damage to otherd, this can also be reciprocated. To illustrate this, by trading Pokemons, I realized that if I offered the Pokemon that my friend was pursuing, chances of gaining rare Pokemons were greatly increased, while offering a mediocre Pokemon never led to a great deal. This formative experience has been an asset when I need to negotiate with business counterparts

To summarize, I believe playing game nurtures problem-solving skills and kindles an insight into mutually beneficial negotiation. Therefore, the benefits of playing games must not be undervalued.

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2 エッセイの構成について

Intro

→トピックのパラフレーズと自分の主張の提示。What is your opinion about this? の設問のため、コンピューターゲームの是非について、自分の意見を主張していきます。

Body Paragraph

→ main idea : Players can improve their abilities to overcome challenges through playing their favorite games.–と主張。その後、Main ideaの内容について、後続の文章で説明を加えていきます。

Body Paragraph

→children learn to develop relationship with other gamers through playing gamesと主張。その後、Main ideaの内容について、後続の文章で説明を加えていきます。

Conclusion

→Body paragraphs のパラフレーズ。

3 単語・文法・構文の解説

Synonyms (類義語)

Devise

Plan の類義語。意味は「考案する」

Hurdles

Problems の類義語。意味は「問題、課題」

Key words

Pros and cons

賛否

A waste of time

時間の無駄

Problem-solving skills

問題解決力

Build mutually beneficial relationships

お互いにとって有益な関係を築く

In need of help

手助けが必要な状況にいる

Something is reciprocated

(自分の行いが)返ってくる

A formative experience

原体験。成功体験。

 

Other useful expressions in IELTS Writing TASK2

Contrastingly,

一方で、

From my perspective, / In my opinion,

私の考えでは、

Maintain

Firmly express one’s opinion と同義。意味は「強く主張する」

Aver

Say something is certainly trueと同義。意味は「―は正しいと強く主張する」

To begin with,

Firstly と同義

I espouse the former ( or the latter )

私は前者(後者)を支持する。Espouse はSupportのFormalな表現。

Having said that

However と同義。意味は「一方で」

On top of that

In addition と同義。意味は「さらに」

Under such circumstances,

こういった状況下では、

@最後に

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